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TMoHS Nude Art Series#3 -Yuki- by UrielManX7

Firstly, the coloring and the anatomy are all there, its a really captivating picture you've drawn and colored and I like the spotlight...

Fire And Ice (speedpaint) by veeturtle

This has dynamic, balance and very neat lighting. The characters are quite eye-catching and colorful and you can tell they've got more ...

Music Magic by veeturtle

Firstly; the details on this are all sound and I appreciate that you're going for a lot of flow, surrounding a static pose (its very po...

WIP by Kyutaiyo
WIP

Now this is awesome and I love the details you already put in and all that you're promising you add -judging by the outlines- this is g...

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Technically, I've been back in the swing of things, since the start of this week, but I'm just now letting you DA peeps know, I'm curb-stomping this flu, even if I'm not back to 100% HP yet.

Another step towards finally getting to work on CLONE (my graphic novel) was just completed; I uploaded a very brief "story" or scene, as you will, that is an option for what the pages may come to look like in the future.
The new framing, lets me toy around more with perspective, lets me focus on key-points in the story and the stuff that's going on, on the pages; it may make it easier to read the book, as well.
I know I can be very lazy with backgrounds and though this sort of justifies me doing so; it should by no means be a way to limit background elements or leave out backgrounds altogether (I'm looking at you, future Me)

So; I'm very much looking for feedback, to see what people think of this new format and my faster, simpler painting style.

Cheerio; hope you're all doing well out there.
  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: Infected Mushroom
  • Reading: Scripts
  • Watching: Yogscast Sips
  • Playing: -with a pen
  • Eating: Sammiches
  • Drinking: Coffee
Broadside by Cookie-Splinters
Broadside
So here's the thing; this is a first for me on many levels.

A) This is the first pic I've painted almost exclusively in Open Canvas (I've upgraded my version so I'm now capable of more flowing, linear coloring) and it was a quick one to boot

B) Indeed, this was the first time I've managed to throw out "page"-content in less than a week

C) This is a suggestion for the new format for my graphic-novel, so I am definitely looking for feedback on this one.

I was going for a flowing and rhythmic narrative to the "story" on these pages, not sure how it sounds but I had some songs on repeat to listen to while writing it and I had the scene in mind.
The new framing, allows me to focus on key points in the story and also, helps me work faster as I get to include as much or little, content, as I want; but it does annoy me to some point that I leave so much of the page, blank.    
~Then again, perhaps it is a good idea to leave most of the pages like this, so its easier to read; that is one idea after all.

Other than that, I have little to add; I just re-used my latest drone-design, added a quick and easily drawn HammerHead cruiser and depicted what a bout between them would look like (though I felt I didn't want to clutter the Scarab with lots of explosions all over it, so had to flip the page for tempo's sake... oopsie..)
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Ugh; getting up way too early to just have a normal sleeping-schedule and to get stuff done before going to work.. ohyay XP
Technically, I've been back in the swing of things, since the start of this week, but I'm just now letting you DA peeps know, I'm curb-stomping this flu, even if I'm not back to 100% HP yet.

Another step towards finally getting to work on CLONE (my graphic novel) was just completed; I uploaded a very brief "story" or scene, as you will, that is an option for what the pages may come to look like in the future.
The new framing, lets me toy around more with perspective, lets me focus on key-points in the story and the stuff that's going on, on the pages; it may make it easier to read the book, as well.
I know I can be very lazy with backgrounds and though this sort of justifies me doing so; it should by no means be a way to limit background elements or leave out backgrounds altogether (I'm looking at you, future Me)

So; I'm very much looking for feedback, to see what people think of this new format and my faster, simpler painting style.

Cheerio; hope you're all doing well out there.
  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: Infected Mushroom
  • Reading: Scripts
  • Watching: Yogscast Sips
  • Playing: -with a pen
  • Eating: Sammiches
  • Drinking: Coffee

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Cookie-Splinters
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Relationship Status: As taken as can be by the all mighty Shadow King Moony!
Work Status: Café Employee + Barista

Art Status: Improving
strengths- dynamic posing
weaknessess- perspective versatility -lack thereof- anatomical inaccuracies and liberties...

Critique and Comments are always welcome :3

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MasterLurker Featured By Owner 15 hours ago  Professional Digital Artist
Hey! Thanks for Fav my Ann Electric Slave picture!
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dubbelu Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist

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Thank you so much for the :+fav:

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Pho-bos Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thank you very much for the favourite (:
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Thanks  for the favorite!
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Tack så mycket för :+fav:! :iconspreadmoreloveplz:
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